10/18/11

No, Something Else

I had finished this strip–color and all–when I decided to totally redo all the dialogue. Here's how the original dialogue went:

MOE: Ow...

MOE: There's something wrong with my eye.

CHARLIE: Your finger's in it.

I changed it to this because I felt that some people may not be able to connect Moe's line and Charlie's line.

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