The little black thing at the edge of the first panel is the end of his closet. The little "spinner" at the left of the second panel is the way back into his closet. In my original rough (this is the first panel), Moe's arms were pointing down, instead of left. I changed this to get the feeling of speed. And Moe's eyes were looking at us, half open. I changed this because he thought he was going to hit the wall, and he didn't want to bump his eyes. And, the dialogue for the first panel said:
Oh, great, I'm gonna bump into the wall...3...2...1...I changed this to make it seem like it was longer. If Nermia wasn't there, he would have bumped into the wall long ago...probably about a half-second ago, in the first panel.
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